“The Cosmology Lesson,” a poem by Daniel Veloso, translated from the Spanish (Uruguay) by Jeannine Marie Pitas

What We Did to the Sky by Patty Paine

The Cosmology Lesson

red dwarves    white dwarves

    red giants

       orange supergiants

the teacher raised his hand

     and with one finger

        traced the diagram

               on the board

suns as yellow as ours

gleaming suns

    from lives like matches

       atrocious explosions

         scattering ashes

             like bright corollas

from these ashes

       the sun was formed

         and Earth

            and all life on it

      the teacher said

boom, boom, boom!

      sounds rang out 

                 in the planetarium’s hall

sitting by the window

  I pressed my face to the glass

     but in the night’s darkness

          I couldn’t see a thing

boom, boom, boom!

    every class we heard this sound

among shadows

       darkness

          the invisible zoo

                   was sleeping

I knew there were cats

      slinking about

and in the trees

      peacocks 

           took refuge

and a big hippopotamus

     was floating in its pond

         revealing just its nose

               and ears

boom, boom, boom!

the classes went on

      the teacher made us imagine

          the center of the milky way

          radio waves

          and dust clouds

             blocking light’s passage

before every class

      I flew on my motorcycle

         risking my life

            to get there on time

how stupid! I’d think later

   once I settled in my seat

           in the back

               by the window

boom, boom, boom!

      the banging went on

   no one in class

          seemed to hear it

 

everything started with a great

         explosion

the universe

       contained in one point

No way!

     someone near me cried out

          incredulous

the teacher shrugged

      with no physics formulas

         or complex mathematics

     believing

           that story

               was an act of faith

the months went by

     and the afternoons got

        longer and longer

until one good day

     I came to class

         and there before my eyes

            out the windows

               was the zoo

Guineafowl

    Patagonian maras

       Indian peacocks

          and so many cats

no light may escape

      from a black hole

but I could only pay attention

    to the weak rays of sunlight

       illuminating

          that zoo

boom, boom, boom!

    until I understood

that terrible banging

     against metal

  was a lonely

elephant

       probably going crazy

       and taking out her rage

          on the doors

             of her prison

the universe

       outstretched

          nearly infinite

             dying of cold

         in the darkness

from the back of the classroom

    I looked out

        at the spring weather

           and the elephant

         balancing

           on the edge of a ditch

I didn’t mourn the death

            of the cosmos

    I considered the slavery

         of the pachyderm

the braided scar

     on its side

  its little ears

       fluttering

   its fresh manure

     inspected by the birds

brown dwarves

       and hot jupiters

cries of peafowl

            in heat

and the headaches

   of imprisoned elephants

I said goodbye to my classmates

     unlocked my motorcycle

        drove down the hill

     through the cold air

I crossed over the rings

   the satellites

     the meteor showers

the moons white as ivory

the sad eyes of imprisonment

boom, boom, boom!

    and the universe

           was born.

La clase de cosmología

enanas rojas    enanas blancas

    gigantes rojas

       supergigantes naranjas

el profesor alzaba su brazo

     y con un dedo

        recorría el diagrama

               en el pizarrón

soles amarillos como el nuestro

soles muy brillantes

    de vidas como fósforos

       explosiones atroces

         que esparcieron cenizas

             como coloreadas corolas

de esas cenizas se formó

       el sol

         la Tierra

            y toda la vida en ella

      decía el profesor

¡bum, bum, bum!

      se oyó en el salón

                 del planetario

sentado contra una ventana

  acercaba mi rostro al vidrio

     pero en la noche negra

          nada se veía

¡bum, bum, bum!

    cada clase ese sonido se escuchaba

entre sombras

       tinieblas

          el zoológico invisible

                   dormía

sabía que por allí andaban

      los gatos

que en los árboles

      los pavos reales tenían

           su refugio

que un gran hipopótamo

     flotaba en su estanque

         asomando sólo su nariz

               y sus orejas

¡bum, bum, bum!

las clases pasaron

      el profesor nos hacía imaginar

          el centro de la vía láctea

          las ondas de radio

          las nubes de polvo

             impidiendo el paso de la luz

cada vez que había clase

      volaba en mi moto

         arriesgando la vida

            para llegar en hora

¡qué tontería! pensaba después

   cuando me ubicaba en mi asiento

           del fondo

               contra la ventana

¡bum, bum, bum!

      seguían los golpes

   nadie en la clase

          parecía oírlos

todo comenzó con una gran

         explosión

el universo

       contenido en un punto

¡Andá!

     gritó un vecino

          incrédulo

el profe se alzó de hombros

      sin fórmulas físicas

         sin matemáticas complejas

     aquel relato

           creerlo

               era un acto de fe

pasaron los meses

     y las tardes se fueron haciendo

        cada vez más largas

hasta que un buen día

     llegué al salón

         y ante mis ojos

            por las ventanas

               el zoológico

gallinas de Guinea

    maras patagónicas

       pavos reales de la India

          y gatos por montones

la luz no podía escapar

      de un agujero negro

pero yo sólo prestaba atención

    a los débiles rayos de sol

       que iluminaban

          el zoológico

¡bum, bum, bum!

    hasta que comprendí

aquellos terribles golpes

     contra el metal

  eran de la elefanta

solitaria

    quizá hasta loca

       desataba su ira

          sobre los portones

             de su prisión

el universo

       estirado

          casi infinito

             moría de frío

         en la oscuridad

desde el fondo del salón

    miraba afuera

        a la primavera

           y a la elefanta

         haciendo equilibrio

           al borde del foso

no me acongojaba la muerte

            del cosmos

    pensaba en la esclavitud

         del paquidermo

su trenza cicatriz

     en su costado

  sus orejas pequeñas

       como aleteando

   su estiércol fresco

     inspeccionado por los pájaros

enanas marrones

       y júpiteres calientes

gritos de pavos reales

            en celo

y dolores de cabeza

   de elefantes prisioneros

saludé a los compañeros

     desaté la moto

        tomé la bajada

     y volví por el aire frío

crucé los anillos

   los satélites

     las lluvias de meteoritos

las lunas blancas como marfil

los ojos tristes del encierro

¡bum, bum, bum!

    y el universo

           nació.

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Uruguayan writer Daniel Veloso (b. 1971) is the author of one book, El aljibe y otros poemas de amor y desamor (The Cistern and Other Poems of Love and Un-love), published by Editorial Yaugurú in 2018. Since 2001 he has authored more than seventy journalistic articles on scientific and cultural topics for Uruguay’s main newspaper, El País. Also, he writes for Relaciones Magazine. When he’s not writing, he enjoys playing volleyball and collecting rare books. He lives in Montevideo’s Old City with his three mischievous cats.


Jeannine Marie Pitas is the translator or co-translator of twelve books of poetry, most recently Uruguayan poet Silvia Guerra’s A Sea at Dawn (Eulalia Books 2023), co-translated with Jesse Lee Kercheval. She is the author of two poetry books, most recently Or/And (Paraclete Press 2023). She lives in Pittsburgh and teaches at Saint Vincent College.

Patty Paine is the author of Grief & Other Animals, The Sounding Machine, and three chapbooks. Her writing and visual work have appeared in Blackbird, The Denver Quarterly, Gulf Stream, Waxwing, Analog Forever, Lomography, The South Dakota Review, and other publications. She is the founding editor of Diode Poetry Journal and Diode Editions and is Director of Liberal Arts & Sciences at VCUarts Qatar. 

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